A Poem
Printing this one out for my office!
Thank you!!
A possible moniker for this masterpiece: “Success”. Model it for every child from an early age. Then reap the societal benefits of an optimistic, forward looking populace striding forward with practiced skill and brilliant hopes.
One can dream (quite literally!)
That picture!
Makes me think of the newly created world to come when Christ sits on his throne ruling in righteousness, and peace reigns.
Amazing - love it
Thank you!
Beautiful and inspiring—
From my perspective, one simple edit makes it resonate with all—
Change ‘a man’ to ‘human’
It won’t impact the meter or the rhyme
But it makes a big difference
Maybe —
just
in
Time.
Printing this one out for my office!
Thank you!!
A possible moniker for this masterpiece: “Success”. Model it for every child from an early age. Then reap the societal benefits of an optimistic, forward looking populace striding forward with practiced skill and brilliant hopes.
One can dream (quite literally!)
That picture!
Makes me think of the newly created world to come when Christ sits on his throne ruling in righteousness, and peace reigns.
Amazing - love it
Thank you!
Beautiful and inspiring—
From my perspective, one simple edit makes it resonate with all—
Change ‘a man’ to ‘human’
It won’t impact the meter or the rhyme
But it makes a big difference
Maybe —
just
in
Time.