Warm Hands, Cold Heart
This is great, Tom! My only suggestion would be to take out some of your adverbs and see it how it feels. Your writing is strong enough that in many places I don't think you need them. Looking forward to the next instalment!
This is great, Tom! My only suggestion would be to take out some of your adverbs and see it how it feels. Your writing is strong enough that in many places I don't think you need them. Looking forward to the next instalment!